Literacy Homework – 7th
March 2014
Your challenge this week is to
write a story of your own that includes all of the spellings you need to
practise this week (Spellings 5 on the school website). Your story can be about
anything you like, but it has to include the spellings that you are practising!
Last night i had a spooky dream about going to an unknown and uncommon place. In my dream i thought the place was unpopular with unlimited monsters. I was uncertain about my situation. humans were strictly disallowed to inter the scary place, but i disagreed and went in disobeying their orders.
ReplyDeleteto my disappointment the gates got shut and i was thrown out of the place.
sadly my clothes were torn to pieces and was despaired.
I awoke by loud bang and saw mummy screaming loudly..,SCHOOL TIME!!!!! WAKE UP NIMLA!!.
BY NIMLA
Once upon a time a unknown boy came to London his name was Mighty Mike. He was a very unpopular boy in school. Also his clothes were very uncommon once he started something became unlimited. He was uncertain about most things aswell. If he was your son you would disallow him to do anything and you would disagree to his ideas. Also he would disappoint you a lot and disobey you. If he was a repair man he would disrepair your things. That's how nasty he is you would not want to have him in your family.
ReplyDeleteTHE END
By Hifza
Secrets Of The Deep Sea
ReplyDeleteOnce there lived a girl called Aaliya she lived with her family, consisting of her parents, grandma, grandpa, her baby sister Ariana and her big brother Mason. The grandparents used to watch unlimited tele. Aaliya loved to read and research about uncommon interesting things. She also watched news channels a lot. Aaliya was only 8 and had blue eyes, black hair and light brown skin. Aaliya was very smart because of all her research. In class her teacher was very proud of her as she was one of the most intelligent kids. She was also very kind and used to help people when they were hurt.
One day she was reading about the unknown secrets of the unpopular deep sea. Suddenly she discovered on the net that someone went down to the unpopular deep sea and never came back. She got very interested and she wanted to find out what actually happened in the deep sea.
Aaliya then went to her Mom and asked if she could go down to the deep sea. But her Mom disagreed. She said, "No, you cannot go there all alone. It is not safe". But Aaliya couldn't resist. She sneaked out with her swimming gear and went down to the beach. She saw that a fishing boat was about to leave and she crept on to it stealthily. Then when the boat was in the mid sea she jumped out of it and swam to the deep sea. While she was swimming someone said," Stop, you cannot go past me". But Aaliya disobeyed him. When she reached the deepest part of the sea, she saw a golden angel fish. She also saw some strange and beautiful sea creatures. Then she noticed a giant purple octopus. But she was lucky as it was sleeping. Suddenly someone grabbed her from behind and sprayed her with sleeping potion.
When she woke up she found herself in an underwater base. Then her kidnapper came and said,"I am the sea guard. I locked you up so that you cannot escape. Now I am going to call the police so that they can come and take you back to your parents." He also asked if she needed anything to be disrepaired. Aaliya said no. When he turned to talk on the phone, Aaliya stole the keys from his pocket and freed herself. She then stealthily went up and out of the base and swam back to the shore.
She realised that the secret of the unpopular deep sea was those strange creatures.
She was a bit uncertain if she should tell her Mom because she didn't want to disappoint her. But still she did, because she knew that lying was bad. Her mom got very worried when she heard it all. Aaliya promised her Mom that she would never ever disagree with her.
Then she wrote about her adventure in her school blog. Everyone loved her story and the unpopular deep sea became very popular.
The end.
Aaratrika
once upon a time, there lived a girl called Jasdeep. She was 16 and had a younger sister called Navdeep. She was 7. Jasdeep was unhappy so Jasdeep's friend gave her a kitten called Coco. Coco is 7 months old.
ReplyDeleteThe happiness of having a kitten was unreal. Everybody adored Coco and loved him a lot. He was cute, fluffy and cuddly. Only thing is that when Coco was unclean then we had to clean him and that was always a chore.
My mummy used to dislike Coco but when she saw how cute Coco was and how cuddly he was, mummy then loved him a lot.
Only thing is though Coco was quiet naughty and disobeyed us quiet a lot. When we told him to note bite he still would so he disobeyed us. Coco was a little cheeky to he always used to unroll the toilet paper and then shred it. I used to distrust Coco because i was always scared that he was going to bite me or scratch me on my face, but as you know he has scratched me a lot.
I love Coco.
THE END
Navdeep
Once there was a wizard who lived in a unknown castle. He had uncommon clothes and he was unpopular with the other wizards because he liked to disagree with them. He luckily had an unlimited supply of wands because his current wand was in disrepair. Sometimes his wands would disobey him and cause trouble.When this happens he would disallow their treats. The wands don't want to disappoint the wizard but they were to selfish not to. He was uncertain that they would ever work.
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time I got tickets to Mexico and I hadn't used them for 10 years but that was unreal. One day I unrolled tinfoil with a hot-dog in it and the kitchen was very unclean. I thought for a minute about the tickets to Mexico. My Dad told me to throw them away, I dislike him. I did as he said but the flight manager gave me another 2 so I could use them. I was unable to go on 15 March because it's my birthday on that day. On that day I disobeyed my Dad to not go to Mexico. He distrusted that I would go but I did. I had a very great time in Mexico. THE END....very mega happy ending.
ReplyDeleteBy Carlos (age 7 soon age 8)
Once I had a dream and it was unreal story.In the dream I saw an unhappy boy who was unclean.The boy was scared of the an old, horrible man.The man tryed to give a dirty sweet for the boy.The little one was then distrust and disobey for the man who unroll that sweet.The boy ran away when the disgusted man call that that sweet was disused.When the boy was running he cryed that he dislikes any sweets.I think that I had that horrible dream because I unused a toothbrush that evening.
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Once upon a time there lived a princess, who lived with her father (the king) in an
ReplyDeletealmost unused palace. It was sparkly and new, it was unreal.
In this sparkly and brand new palace only the king was unclean which
horrified the princess and made her really unhappy. She could not
understand the kings dislike of water and because he never bathed he would never
unroll the bath towels. When she asked him he was very shy and would not answer
her and would tell her not to ask him again.
The princess did not want to disobey her father but she was worried that he
would either fall ill, from not bathing or not be respected by his people for being so smelly and unclean, so she decided to spy on him.
The princess followed him around the castle, hoping for clues to find out why her father would not wash. She noticed that the king never swam in the larger swimming baths, or bathed the elephants, which every king before him loved to do. Finally he would never go out to the sea on his ship either.
It was not washing the king was afraid of but the water itself and maybe drowning in it, even his bath which was so big that the water almost covered his head when he sat in it.
“How could she sort this out?” she thought to herself. She could not confront her father because then he would distrust her for spying on him. She had to think of a clever way to get her father over the fear of water. What she knew was that her father was very curious and as we know liked everything kept very clean and sparkly, but did also like fun. And that gave her an idea.
The princess arranged for the elephant keepers to take the elephants into the bathroom. She then ordered some big disused brass bath tubs full of water and got them positioned around the big bath. She also had the best swimmers hid in the room. Finally she put a massive sign on the bathroom door that read:
“DISABLE BATHROOM – OUT OF ORDER PLEASE USE ANOTHER”.
Before long the king walked past the bathroom and saw the sign. He was curious so walked in to see what was going on and what he saw was his elephants in and around his bath squirting water at each, using their trunks to suck water from the big brass bath tubs.They and the keepers were having such fun but making an awful mess on the marble floor and gold taps.
“What on earth is going on here?” The king bellowed.
The princess replied, “I thought if you were not going to use the bath then I would let the elephants use it. And they do seem to be loving it!”
“This bah is not for elephants, it was built for a king!” he shouted but he had to admit that they were all having fun. And at that point one of the elephants squirted some water straight at the King, which sent him flying into the marble bath which by now was full of water.
The princess screamed, this was not what she had planned at all. The kings swimmers dove into the bath and pulled up a soaking and shocked king from the bottom of the bath. The princess feared the worst and the king looked red with anger. But at that moment he started to laugh and said “boy that was fun and I do believe that I have overcome my fear of the water. Lets do it again!”
The End
By Jasleen.
Once there was a boy smart Sid. He had black smooth hair, green sparkly eyes and whitish skin. His favourite planet was Mars his room was never unclean because he unused toys disused games disobey bad things was never unkind. Still he really wanted to go To Mars to study the things that were there and no all the things that happen in Mars so he could try things on Earth. So he decided to make a time machine that will take him to Mars in one day so that is what he did and the next day he flew to Mars were it was quit red.
ReplyDeleteThere he met an alien called alien Aalen but Sid saw that he was unhappy and was disable. Aalen looked unreal to him and kind of like a ghost. Nobody unrolls his ears and he looked strange to Sid. So he untrusted him and stepped back. Suddenly there was a loud BOOOM…………… Olimpet Moons had erupted and Lava flew out some aliens died because of the heat and some fell right into the Lava like they were blind. Sid had to do something so he got all the water he had in his time machine and mixed it with some chemicals witch can melt Lava then he threw it into the Lava. Quickly it melted and the aliens and alien Aalen was all happy with Sid so they said thank you to him.
Then the bad thing happened He could not stay in Mars for even one day because there were no water, no food, not enough oxygen and too much sand. So in the afternoon he had to go home then the aliens said by and Sid flew of. The next day Sid sat down and thought about aliens in Mare and Mars.
One day I met my friend he told me that he was unpopular.I disagree with that I said your a fantastic friend. You have unlimted amount of friends and famaly that care about you.Why are you uncertain about that?
ReplyDeleteThe following day I met up whith my friend after school I told him please can we play a game together lets not disobey the rules of the game.My friend didn't disappiont me. My friend is popualar now.
by Gurtej
The four children and the stranger
ReplyDeleteThere were once four children called Rosalind , Robbie ,Samantha and Maudie. Rosalind was a wise bookworm who is the eldest of the children. She loves identifying and learning things. Robbie is a funny, crazy boy, if you cut the top of his you'll see tiny, patterned animals running around like mad and he just loves going to the zoo. Smash is a impatient, bad-mannered girl who is the second eldest. Her mum is called Alice for Alice In Wonderland and she thinks plus she thinks she is popular when she is actually unpopular and Smash's (Rosalind's stepsister ) real name is Samantha. Lastly, Maudie who is the most uncommon + youngest of the family with golden, curly hair and her favourite relative is Samantha.
The four were staying as their mum was at summer school. The next day they went to Oxshoot Woods ( which has an unlimited amount of trees) for a picnic, but Alice did disagree. Before they reached there up in space a girl called Rosemary wondered how it was on Earth, so she grabbed the SC (Space Cruiser) STAT. Then she landed in Oxshoot Woods and goes to sleep in the sand.
The children were now eating their delicious food with tasty treats. After Dad and Alice had fell asleep the children played digging to not disappoint Maudie. So they started digging in the dry sand. Rosalind was uncertain about it. Instead she fixed Maudie's disrepair cup.
Soon they found a girl with a reddish sort of hair, a white and green jumpsuit and light brown skin. The little girl was unknown, not even Rosalind knew her. Rosalind only guessed that she was from space, which was right. Then the little girl woke up. "My name is Rosemary. I'm from outer space", she explained sleepily. "Just as I thought, you looked funny enough", said Rosalind smartly. "Well done", giggled Maudie joyfully. Maudie held her hand out to shake hands but Rosemary disallowed her. "Don't touch me, you will get my fever!", exclaimed Rosemary loudly. "What your fever?", Maudie asked softly. There was silence and Rosemary's back turned quietly. Then she started to chat about her fever. "If a human on Earth touches me, I freeze like a statue and then my body starts to disappear. Mum has a recipe to cast it and reverse. We have too many dummies at home, so we normally cast the spell on them and never reverse the recipe, and Maudie don't touch me!" But Maudie wasn't listening and disobeyed the rule and gently stroked her back! Then Rosemary's leg started to freeze. "Get some golden apples and platinum pears from the orchard and get some primroses from the silver maze!"Rosemary screamed."You have 10 minutes!". The four were looking and Smash saw the orchard in the horizon so they ran to it and picked 5 golden apples and platinum pears. The silver maze was near and at the front was a primrose so they picked it. Rosalind looked at her watch and there were only five minutes! So they got back as quickly as they can and fed all the ingredients to Rosemary.Then she was all better, next it was time to go home. What an adventure ! THE END
Once there was a boy called Freddy Unpopular. He wanted to be named Freddy Popular, so he deceided to not do anything that would make him unpopular. So
ReplyDeletewhen his mother said "tidy up your room Freddy" Freddy said "No I disagree". His mum then said "right I disallow this" so Freddy had to go up and tidy up
his room anyway.
When Freddy went to school the next day his freind Tommy had an idea, "disappoint your mother again and she might send you away and that way
you will never need to tidy up your room!". Freddy thought about this for a while, and when he got home he decided not to do what Tommy had said to him.
Freddy instead decided to shove his toys and clothing underneath his bed to make it disappear. He then sat on his bed and thought aloud "I wish I could rule
the country so everybody would obey me insted of disobey me". When he got off his bed he heared a crack and looked down and saw one of his toys had broken,
it was in a state of disrepair.
Looking outside his window, Freddy then saw a his local toyshop which had an'unlimited sale' and it had his brocken toy in the window "MY BROCKEN TOY!"
Freddy shouted. But Freddy was now uncertain about buying the toy becuse he wasn't sure if his Mum would notice it had brocken, but he did have a lot of
pocket money he thought to himself.
Freddy was now so desperate that he popped out at night just before the shop was about to close, so he's mother would not notice. When Freddy got home, he
wasn't sleepy at all and decided to tidy up his room up properly, and did not even care if he was still popular or not. Unknown to Freddy's Mum that he went
out last night, she gasped "wow, your room is sparkling". Freddy shrugged his shoulders and simply smiled, he was just happy about his toy, even though it
was uncommon.
The End.
By Zarah
WOW! I have been completely blown away by your stories so far, Big Ben class! Now as a challenge, write 2 stars and a wish for someone else's wonderful story. Remember your comments need to be kind and thoughtful.
ReplyDeleteMiss Gale
once there lived a boy named jack . He had green eyes and white skin he was unpopular his friends would have laughed at him every day so then he wanted to be a millionaire .He started of by DISOBEY HIS MUMS ORDERS!!!! HIS MUM WAS VERY UNHAPPY SHE DISTRUSTED HIM AND DISLIKED HIM .She rapped him up in disused tinfoil she didn't understand why it was unclean? it was a bit old and unused he was disable to fit in when he woke up it was all a dream
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