Friday, 13 December 2013

Literacy Homework


Homework- Due Thursday 19th December

For homework this week, write an acrostic poem based on a winter theme. An example is shown below. You don’t have to just use the word winter for your poem, it is up to you!
Wonderful snow
Icicles hanging
Never falling
Trees covered in snow
Excited for spring
Remembering winter is fun

24 comments:

  1. Snow is falling

    Nobody knows what time Santa will come

    On the snowy mountains icicles are hanging

    What will you get on Christmas day

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  2. Christmas is a wonderful time to share
    Here be good then you will get presents from Santa
    Remember on Christmas you give
    Its a happy time butcold
    Sometims you make snowmen in your garden
    Time for good fings to happen
    Make new freind
    As well we shold play along
    So this is a speshell time to share.
    By Gurtej

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  3. Checking gifts from Santa, family and friends
    Having good fun with your gifts
    Relying on family and friends to come to dinner
    Its extremely snowy outside
    Santa has great toys
    Time for opening great presents
    Mince pies yummy!
    Amazing lights on the Christmas tree
    Singing Christmas carol

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  4. wear warm clothes
    in this snowy day
    never this cold
    try to stay warm
    endless snow
    rest by the fire place
















































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  5. wear warm clothes
    in this snowy day
    never this cold
    try to stay warm
    endless snow
    rest by the fire place
















































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  6. Snow is falling.
    And he is coming.
    None of the people know when he is coming.
    Tell everyone to go to sleep.
    Amazing presents will be received.

    Aaratrika

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  7. Santa is coming to town
    Nobody wants to be naughty
    Out side is very cold
    We are all warm inside
    Hannah

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  8. Holly is very spiky
    Oh, don't touch it
    Leaves with berries
    Listen to an adult
    You will prick your finger

    Someone special is coming to town
    And comes to your house on Christmas night
    Never stay awake or he might not come
    Till it's morning you'll not know if you had been good or not
    And this person is always spying on you

    Snow is falling everywhere
    No green grass showing anywhere
    Oh, snowmen and snow angels
    Winter is the most popular season

    Chilly on the season
    Hats, scarves, coats on
    It is chilly in winter
    Little animals keep warm and hibernate
    Lovely, hot fires are lit
    Yipee! Brrrrr

    Frost comes before snow
    Really slippery! Don't slip
    Oh, we love ice skating on the frost
    So we can't wait for more
    To the outdoors!!

    - Posted by Anya

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    1. An excellent example of an acrostic poem Anya! I love how you have used a range of punctuation in your writing too. Miss Gale

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    2. Nice rhyme you put in there.

      Aaratrika

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  9. S ant claws has lots of kind reindeers.
    A amazing gift is going to be under the trees
    N we year is going to came after
    Christmas

    A lol schools are closed at Christmas
    T tomorrow is monday
    By Nimla

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  10. Snow is falling from the sky Night time falls winters by On christmas santa claus brings you presents winters here lets play and smile

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  11. Snow is everywhere
    And he is coming
    Night time is when he comes
    Tell everyone to go to sleep
    And then you will find amazing presents under your tree.
    By Abhinav

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  12. Frost is hanging

    Running in the snow, back to my house

    Everyone is at my house having a cup of hot tea

    Even though its cold out there, Im still having fun

    Zooming Santa will give us presents

    I like receiving presents

    Never get on the naughty list, it gives you bad luck

    Getting the presents is my favourite part, what is yours?

    By Zarah

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  13. Snow is falling and your friends are calling 'Yoo Hoo'
    Not a sight of green grass anywhere
    On Christmas everyone likes to make snowmen
    When Santa comes everyone gets excited
    Men and Women go shopping
    Evergreen trees are coverd in snow
    Never the less Christmas is here!

    By Manroop

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    1. I love your poem Manroop.Hifza bigben

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  14. Snow is falling from the sky
    Night time falls winters by
    On Christmas Santa Claus brings you surprises
    Winters is here let's play and smile

    Have a merry Christmas by Shriya

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  15. Reindeers are going to help santa
    Eating with your family is nice at Christmas
    Ingerings at Christmas are bad
    Nothing of the things will stop santa with his reindeers
    Drawing pictures with santa in it is good
    Empty stuff like food is bad because at Christmas family comes to eat
    Eating with your family at Christmas is what Christmas is about
    Roasted chiken is the populest thing to eat at Christmas
    By Maria

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  16. Santa will come
    A lot of presents will be given
    Naughty children might not get any presents
    Turkey is something you eat at Christmas
    A present is not the most important thing

    Candy canes are a Christmas lolly pop
    Lapland is a fun joyful place
    A family time is bringing Christmas joy
    Under the tree will be presents
    So just remember Santa doesn't want to be seen!

    By Carlos

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  17. Wind is blowing

    Icicles are hanging

    Nobody knows when he'll come

    Try to stay war

    Everyone injoy's Christmas

    Ribens are needed

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    1. I really like your poem Hifza but it could have been better if you writen try to watch star wars in the fourth row but I now what you meen you were trying to say try to stay worm.

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  18. Snow is falling
    A lot of presents will be given
    Nobody will be sad
    Today is Christmas
    A lot of happy children

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  19. Snowflakes are very delicate
    No touching them
    Oh,they are fragile
    Winter is when you get them
    Flakes that are made of snow
    Lots make snow
    A baby would even love them
    Kids like them
    Everyone loves snowflakes
    So cold!

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  20. Wow Big Ben class! I can see you have been super busy over the Christmas holidays with your poetry. I don't think I can pick a favourite as they're all wonderful! Miss Gale

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