Thursday 8 May 2014

100 Word Challenge!

Here is a photograph by Jane Hewitt. 

You have 100 words to produce a creative piece of story writing about this. Look closely at the picture and use your imaginations to tell a really great story. Please visit posts by other children and leave a supportive comment. We learn best from each other.
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  1. Anonymous11 May 2014 at 09:59

    The Bumble Bee And The Two Brothers

    Once there lived to boys called James and Jake they both used to film movies.

    One day they went outside to play. They were having so much fun when they heard a buzzing sound.

    Then Jake went to get his camera. But when he went outside again he could not find his brother.

    Suddenly when he looked up, he saw a giant Bumble Bee. He got scared and then he saw his big suitcase and hid inside it. And was surprised to see his brother inside.

    They hid there but the bee found them. When they were found they ran around In circles and bumped into the camera.

    Then they thought of an idea to kill the bee with the camera flash.

    So with the camera they chased the bee and kept clicking the flash again and again. Finally flash flash flash the bee was blinded and crashed against a tree and fell dead. James and Jake publish all those pictures on the TV and they lived happily ever after.

    THE END


    By Aaratrika

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  2. Anya12 May 2014 at 11:21

    Shrunk!
    By Anya
    Once there were two twins, Nhite and White. They were the same, never ever fell out with each other and they are now 23! They worked for the paparatzzi. It was the Summer break so the twins split with family. On their way to the bus, just before they crossed the bridge, on the floor, there was, a red torch! The two little lads, the ones with bright thoughts, started to shrink! The couple then found a bee ( they thought it was a person in a bee costume) and White took pictures while Nhite interviewed it. When they carried on their journey the pair realised they had shrunk! The evil witch Sacra ( 'not gifted' in Gibling which is her language) spotted that the twins had fell for her trick, but the siblings were too quick. They went running to the wizards castle. They asked the wizard "Please can you turn us to full again?" and the lads were back to human size again. Then they marched to Sacra's hut and forced her to go inside the oven and Sacra melted.

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  3. Anonymous19 May 2014 at 07:51

    hi my name is shannon i go to the marsh school i love the photo
    of the bee it looks so cool it looks so real like is real people tiching that
    i think to photo was cool

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