Friday 2 May 2014

Literacy homework 2nd May 2014


Literacy Homework- Friday 2nd May

 

This week we have been learning about the rules of dialogue.

 

For homework this week you have to add the speech marks in the correct places. It is quite tricky. You’ll probably need to read through the passage several time to work out what each character is saying.

 

Excuse me, said the man. Can you tell me what the time is? I think it’s about 8 o’clock, replied Graham. I haven’t got my watch on but I remember seeing the time on the town hall clock a few minutes ago. The town hall! said the man. That’s just what I’m looking for. Can you point me in the right direction? Certainly, said Graham. You just go down there past the bank, turn left, go straight on and the town hall will be on your right hand side. Brilliant, said the man, Thanks for your help. That’s okay, said Graham.

 

You might also want to consider how else you can improve this passage by following other rules for writing dialogue such as using a new paragraph for a new speaker.

8 comments:

  1. "Excuse me", said the man
    "Can you tell me what time it is?"
    "I think it's about 8:00",replied Graham
    "I haven't got my watch on but I remember seeing the time on the town hall clock a few minutes ago"."The town hall!",said the man."That's just what I'm looking for".
    "Can you point me in the right direction?"
    "Certainly", said Graham
    "You just go down there by the bank , turn left,go straight on and the town hall will be on your right hand side".
    "Brilliant",said the man
    "Thanks for your help"
    "That's ok",said Graham.




    By Hifza

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  2. "Excuse me", said the man. "Can you tell me what the time is?"
    "I think it’s about 8 o’clock", replied Graham. "I haven’t got my watch on but I remember seeing the time on the town hall clock a few minutes ago".
    "The town hall!" said the man. "That’s just what I’m looking for. Can you point me in the right direction?"
    "Certainly", said Graham. "You just go down there past the bank, turn left, go straight on and the town hall will be on your right hand side".
    "Brilliant", said the man, "Thanks for your help".
    "That’s okay", said Graham.

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  3. ''Excuse me''said the man. ''Can you tell me what the time is?'' ''I think it is about 8 o'clock'', replied Graham.I haven't got a watch on but I remember seeing it in the town hole clock a few minutes ago. ''The town hall!'' said the man. That is just what I'm looking for. Can you point me in the right direction? Certainly said Graham. You just go down there past the bank, turn left, go straight on and the town hall will be on your right hand side. ''Brilliant'',said the man, Thanks for your help. ''That is okay '' said Graham.


    By Senuda

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  4. ''Excuse me'', said the man. 'Can you tell me what the time is?''
    '' I think it’s about 8 o’clock'', replied Graham. ''I haven’t got my watch on but I remember seeing the time on the town hall clock a few minutes ago''.
    ''The town hall!'' said the man. ''That’s just what I’m looking for. Can you point me in the right direction? ''
    ''Certainly'', said Graham.'' You just go down there past the bank, turn left, go straight on and the town hall will be on your right hand side''.
    '' Brilliant'', said the man, ''Thanks for your help''.
    ''That’s okay'', said Graham.

    By Aaratrika

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  5. "Excuse me," said the man. "Can you tell me what the time is?"

    " I think it’s about 8 o’clock," replied Graham." I haven’t got my watch on but I remember seeing the time on the town hall clock a few minutes ago."

    " The town hall!" said the man. "That’s just what I’m looking for. Can you point me in the right direction?"

    "Certainly", said Graham. "You just go down there past the bank, turn left, go straight on and the town hall will be on your right hand side."

    " Brilliant," said the man, "Thanks for your help."

    " That’s okay," said Graham.
    By Jasleen

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  6. "Excuse me" , said the man
    "can you tell me what time it is?"
    "I think it's about 8 o'clock" , replied Graham
    "I haven't got my watch but I remember seeing the town hall clock a few minutes ago."
    "The town hall!" said the man "that's just what I'm looking for. Can you point me in the right direction?"
    "Certainly" said Graham. You just go down there past the bank, turn left, go straight on and the Town Hall will be on your right hand side".
    "Brilliant", said the man, "thanks for your help".
    "that's okay" said Graham.

    By Zarah

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  7. "Excuse me" said the man "Can you tell me what the time is?"

    "I think it is about 8 o'clock" replied Graham "I haven't got my watch on but I remember seeing the time on the town hall clock a few minutes ago?"

    "The town hall!" said the man "That's just what I am looking for. Can you point me in the right direction?"

    "Certainly" said Graham. "You just go down there past the bank, turn left, go straight on and the town hall will be on your right hand side."

    "Brilliant" said the man "Thanks for your help"

    "That's ok" said Graham

    By Carlos

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  8. "Excuse me",said the man
    "Can you tell me what the time is?"
    "I think it's 8 o'clock,"replied Graham.
    "I haven't got my watch on but I remember seeing the time on the town hall clock a few minutes ago."
    "The town hall! said the man."That's just what i'm looking for"."Can you point me in the right directions?"
    "certainly"said Graham.
    "You just go down there past the bank,turn left,go straight on and the town hall will
    and the town hall will be on your right hand side."
    "brilliant," said the man,thanks for your help.
    your most welcome.

    from Abhinav

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