Tuesday 24 June 2014

100 Word Challenge

Here is a prompt for you to use in your writing:

…but it was far too hot…


Try to write a story about this using only 100 words!

9 comments:

  1. but it was to hot my face melted off like a banana off the face and off heaven and hell





    by mikolaj kozdron

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    1. Good start Mikolaj! Can you edit it and make it a longer piece of writing. Check it makes sense too!

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  2. why did you pot a pincher of a sun it burning my howl bode

    by sannan

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  3. But it was far too hot to do anything,so I ate 3 ice creams at once.Just then my skin started burn because of playing in the garden so much.So I decided to play with my water gun to cool myself down.But it didn't work so I put lots of ice on my face.

    by Aayan

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  4. The magical day
    Hi, I am Ariel. I am a little unicorn and this story is about an adventure that took place in Cloudthonia.
    One day I was gazing out of the window at the blue sky, hearing the laughter of other ponies, feeling the wind in my mane. I felt relaxed until my unicorn mum came in and exclaimed “ Do your homework, you’ve got your assessment!”.
    It’s the next day, and I’m going to rainbow fountains. The fall has all colours of the rainbow and all unicorn bathe themselves in it, but we couldn’t go because it was far too hot.

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  5. But it was far too hot for me to say outside so I went inside where it was nice and cool. As it was really hot the ice cream van gave us some ice cream. We then decided to sit outside but in the shaded part of our garden. This was so that we didn't get sunburn. Our kitten was also really hot that he joined us in the shade where he fell asleep. The heat makes my cat sleepy.

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  6. I was just going into my garden on a beautiful sunny day, excited to ride my scooter but it was to hot. It felt like the sun was right on top of me, burning my soft skin. I could feel my temperature
    rising, but I still wanted to ride. I desperately grabbed the handles of my scooter but it felt like they were melting, and two hot the touch. I thought to myself where is the shade, as the heat was making me feel uncomfortable.

    I found a tree and sat underneath it with my scooter; it felt good to cool down.

    By Zarah

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  7. today we went to the park to ride my cycle . It was the hottest day of summer we i was really melting it was far to hot because .I forgot to pack ice lolly's and water I was burning instead of cold water .I accidently bought hot water it was like hot chocolate warmmed in the micro wave for 5 minutes or more.then all because we were all thirsty we went back home and had three bottles of cold water and ice lolly's to cool our selfs down after such a hot journey to Lampton park and back home.

    By Abhinav

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  8. Once it was a really hot day but it was far too hot for Sam.It was so hot for him so then he was sweating.Sam then went swimming but that did not help.Then Sam that time saw something on the internet.He saw there a great idea.It said that you need to drink lots of juces.So he took out all the drinks what he had at home.Sam opened a lot of carton juces.The boy drank all of them.One hour later his tommy was full, then his dad came back from his work and screamed what a mess is this!

    by Maria

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